爱吃辣的加拿大大叔

雅思托福10多年一线教学

中文说得还不错，头像是他家猫

在这里分享他原创的雅思写作干货

每篇范文都有配音，在同名公众号“英语考试Cat”

你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，给大家带来一个雅思大作文的高分范文。

老规矩，以下是正文目录：

1，题目

2，审题

3，高分范文

4，范文朗读

5，范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：

• 题目改述
• 报告类大作文高分句型
• 展示“词汇丰富度”的词汇&短语
• 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇&句型

上题：

An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

审题：

• Type: Advantages and disadvantages (report style 报告类)
• Body 1: convenience and saves time
• Body 2: encourages a sedentary lifestyle and has a negative effect on local business.

- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -

▲范文音频戳这里▲

A growing phenomenon within the population is that of Internet shopping. This essay shall explore both the benefits and drawbacks of this situation.