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上海中考英语145(助力高中)免费助力上海学生中考英语达成145分以上,重点突破与达成以下目标:

1.听说测试达到满分(复述与表达),

2. 写作达到A档18分以上

3. 听力语法词汇阅读达到扣分2分以内

4. 为高中四大题型打基础(翻译与概要写作、语法填空,词汇填空和完形填空)

提示:

(1)上海中考听说测试2023年开始将从目前的10分增加到15-20分,用来筛选学生的意图更明显。

(2)上海初中英语从2023年开始将改版,目前用了将近20年的牛津教材将成为历史,而高中教材已于2020年率先改版,对学生的能力要求更上一个台阶。

今天开始发几位基础薄弱初三学生的作文修改(坐标:杨浦区内最底层的学校之一,定位:100-110)

只有同辈作文,才能深有感触;只有对比原文和我的修改稿,才能懂得写作之道。请珍惜最最最干货!

修改前 My special experience as a volunteer

I was a volunteer in the library last summer holiday. However, something special happened to me during my work. A boy returned me a book that he had borrowed from the library. But after a few minutes, I couldn’t find the book! I was very nervous because I made a mistake. I had to pay for the missing book. Although I could have the excuse that I never found the book to avoid punishment, I still admitted that it was my fault. Suddenly, a staff member called me and reminded me that there was a book on my seat. That was the missing one! When I was praised by all the staff in the library,I felt too proud of myself to say a word. From the special experience, I learned about taking responsibility is very important. It makes you a more responsible and respectable person.

修改后: My special experience

I was a volunteer in the library last summer holiday. However, there was a problem during my work. A boy returned me a book that he had borrowed from the library. But after a few minutes, I couldn’t find the book! I was very nervous because I made a mistake. I had to pay for the missing book. Although I could have the excuse that I failed to find the book to avoid punishment, I still admitted that it was my fault. Suddenly, a staff member called me and reminded me that there was a book on my seat. That was the missing one! When I was praised by all the staff in the library,I felt too proud of myself to say a word. From the experience, I learned about taking responsibility is very important. It makes you a more responsible and respectable person.

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